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The Meeting Pg. 5- Bella

by ~FeatherWriter

Bella

I was shocked. More shocked than when Edward told me he was a vampire. More shocked than when Jacob told me he was a werewolf. Because, those times, I’d figured it out, and then had it confirmed. This was just overwhelming.

Wings. They had wings. Like angels or fairies, but for real. Maybe they were angels. Hadn’t that one girl said her name was Angel? If vampires and werewolves were real, why not angels?

Edward tapped me on the shoulder, bringing me back to reality. I remembered that we were making introductions. It was probably my turn. I stepped out from behind Edward. “I’m Bella, and I’m a human.” I shot a glance at him. “ … for now.”

Jacob hissed, loud enough for everyone to hear, reminding us that it was now his turn. We turned toward him, waiting for him to either say something or start his introduction. He glared at Edward, folding his arms across his chest. Normally that would have looked a little immature, but Jacob pulled it off, somehow looking menacing.

”I don’t have to go along with your little ‘introductions’, leech,” he snarled.

“Yes, but that wouldn’t be polite.” Edward replied with a grin that made me feel like I was missing out on an inside joke.

Jacob looked at him with absolute hatred. “I’ll give you impolite…”

Max tensed, sensing that a fight was coming. I wasn’t about to let that happen.  “Jacob, stop it.” I glared at him. “Just introduce yourself.”

“I hate it when you do that,” he pouted. Reluctantly, he turned to Max’s group. “Whatever. Jacob. Werewolf.” He pointed to the two wolves beside him. “Quil. Embry.”

I crossed my arms. “Would it kill you to say more than five words?”

Max laughed. “It’s okay, Bella. I’m used to talking to a mute.” She looked at the one called Fang. He shrugged and, fittingly, said nothing.

The little African-American girl who I thought was named Nudge spoke up. “So are we allowed to talk to them now?”

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Wow. That one was short. It looked so much longer on my paper.

And BTW this is the second-to-last one. The final page will be up soon, but I've gotta finish writing it!
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Not bad. You accually put the characters personalitys into it. Im fairly impressed after the other TwilightX Max Ones I've read. I suggest you keep going xD

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Heh. That's actually my fault. It is completed, I just forgot to put the last one in the folder. It should be in there now. And thanks for the great feedback, it was fun to write!

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this is too cool for school lolol

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~Monique-Nudge May 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
wow! I havent read that series, I think its Twilight, I dunno. but I have read MR, great series. Awesome.

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~o0XxToxicAngelxX0o May 4, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
True, true...Lolz

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~o0XxToxicAngelxX0o May 3, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Great job! I like the "Would it kill you to say more than five words" thing! I'm sad it's almost over, it's funny ^_^.

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Thanks! I'll probably do more fan art between the Flock and the Cullens. And there's always the blog...

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